Post your revised thesis for Essay 2 as a comment to this post. Then identify all the sub-points in your thesis. These sub-points should be developed and supported in the analysis paragraphs of your essay. See the example below:
This advertisement is telling its viewers that they can increase their social status (1) and add exceptional adventure to their lives (2) by purchasing Land Rover vehicles (3). To convey this message, the advertisement symbolizes a culture foreign (4) to its Western viewers (5), appealing to their fears that they are living unexciting lives (6). The Land Rover logo provides a solution to this fear (7); by buying a Land Rover, the viewer can escape a regular lifestyle and experience exotic cultures that only few can afford to enjoy.
“Hamster Boy” as a successful advertising print tells its audiences that “the products of “Sweet From Heaven” are such delicious which can give you fantasy feeling and satisfy all the imagination.” Through analyzing the circus, boy scout, and hamster cheek elements of the print, we can deduct that the intended audiences are children who have the strong curiosities and certain English level.
“Hamster Boy” as a successful advertising print tells its audiences that they can be outstanding in crowds (1) and be satisfied their imagination (2).” The advertisers utilize the “hamster cheek” to attract children’s (3) attention(4) and arouse the children’s appetites (5). “Hamster Boy” add circus elements (6) to create the desires of children to enter “fantasy land” (7), and it also combines circus culture to arouse desires of children forward wonderful childhood. The logo of “Sweet From Heaven” provides an entrance of escaping reality, and inviting to children to experience a totally novel feeling which everyone should own.
Promising start but you don’t yet clearly explain how Sweet Freaks presents itself as an exceptional type of candy.
This advertisement is telling viewers that in American culture, children and their emotions are a complicated aspect but by taking something that seems fearful, children can turn it into a comforting friend that gives them the aid they seek. To convey this message, the advertisement symbolizes the beast as a reflection of one’s feelings, in this case the child is projecting his feelings to the beast. The small sentence in the middle of the poster provides the idea that the beast and the little boy are connected by the way it says “There is one in everyone”. The viewer can imagine being emotionally connected to a beast.
This advertisement is telling viewers that in American culture (1), American children and their emotions are a complicated aspect but by taking something that seems fearful (2), children turn it into a comforting friend that gives them the aid they seek (3). To convey this message, the advertisement symbolizes the beast (4) as a reflection of one’s feelings, in this case the child is projecting his feelings to the beast (5). The small sentence in the middle of the poster (6) provides the idea that the beast and the little boy are connected (7) by the way it says “There is one in everyone”. The viewer can imagine being emotionally connected to a beast.
Interesting ideas but you seem to be missing a step. Remember that the advertisement wants to get viewers into the movie. How does it do that? Is it appealing to children? Adults? Or both? How do you know?
When the first time see this advertisement the explicit message is obvious that we can easily understand it is an public service advertisement that appeal drivers don’t drive while you drink.
As we know, public service announcement is information dissemination which aim to change people’s attitude toward some social issues, it’s Non-profit and always made by some Public Welfare organization. However , as an world-famous automobile company BMW is not an Non-profit company, it seems that BMW company is trying to using this public service advertisement to build its social status which would affect consumer’s choices.
When the first time see this advertisement the explicit message is obvious that we can easily understand (1 it is an public service advertisement) that (2 appeal drivers don’t drive while you drink by posting the combined legs .) As we know, public service announcement is information dissemination which aim to (3 change people’s attitude toward some social issues), it’s Non-profit and (4 always made by some Public Welfare organization). However , as ( 5 an world-famous automobile company BMW is not an Non-profit company), it seems that (6 BMW company is trying to using this public service advertisement to build its social status )which (7 would affect consumer’s choices.)
Good work. However, consider how the advertisement appeals to a specific fear in viewers. Remove the definition of “public service announcement” from your thesis.
Add: the combined legs implicit the terrible consequence of drink and drive which arouse people’s fear.
Remove: the definition of the public service…
When the first time see this advertisement the explicit message is obvious that we can easily understand (1 it is an public service advertisement) that (2 appeal drivers don’t drive while you drink by posting the combined legs .)The combined legs implicit the terrible consequence of drink and drive which arouse people’s fear.(3) However , as ( 4an world-famous automobile company BMW is not an Non-profit company), it seems that (5 BMW company is trying to using this public service advertisement to build its social status )which (6 would affect consumer’s choices.)
This movie poster is trying to show the audiences that they can understand the importance of peace and this movie could meet people who like fantasy film. According to this movie poster, it shows another amazing world to curious people and make them feel the emotions from the movie.
1: audience 2: importance of peace 3: meet people who like fantasy film 4: amazing world 5: make them feel emotions from the movie
This is too vague. Remember that an effective thesis must be specific. Identify and use key terms that are central to your argument. Help your reader understand how the advertisement motivates certain people to watch the movie.
With its dynamic actions and futuristic robots, “Transformers” become one of the most famous movie series in the America. This poster is intended to lure the audiences to buy the tickets by inducing their curiosity. The poster provides several hints to imagine the enemy, but it never gives any direct clue for who are the invaders. The shade on the bottom of the poster highlighting the robot and the people standing on the burning city and pique curiosity, what has happened to this town? The robot and the people facing forward, where the shade appears from, lead the audiences to imagine the enemy they are looking at. Also, destroyed city and the man and woman’s attitude towards the shade signifies that human being is powerless against the “unknown” enemy invading the earth. The word “EARTH’S LAST STAND” on the top of the poster implies that only these gigantic robots are able to fight against the enemy and protect the humanity.
this advertisement is telling the audiences that this movie will provides the spectacular actions (1) and the futuristic robots that they may desire (2). To convey this message, this poster foreshadows the war (3) between earth and invaders (4) by showing destroyed and burning city, that may familiar to American (5). Using their fear of the war and the terrorism (6), this poster effectively grab the curiousity, aspecially the American (7), how would this robot protects the humanity?
Promising start. Consider how the advertisement appeals to specific fears and/or desires in the target audience.
This poster is telling us that an average American can be different from the rest of the people, be unique, if he is willing to take some risks. This way he will achieve a higher status between the rest of the people. As every American desire to be unique.
This poster is telling us that an average American can be different from the rest of the people, be unique, if he is willing to take some risks. This way he will achieve a higher status between the rest of the people. As every American desire to be unique. An looking at this we can say that the intended audience are American young males, because they have stronger ambitions and wishes to be different.
This poster is telling us that an average American can be different from the rest of the people, be unique, (1) if he is willing to take some risks. (2) This way he will achieve a higher status between the rest of the people (3). As every American desire. it’s also telling us that this way to be unique could be excited, full of adventures and dangers (4) but it’s worth it if at the end you achieve your goals. And looking at this we can say that the intended audience are American young males, because they have stronger ambitions and wishes to be different
Good attempt but your reader would not know that you are talking about a film, much less Jurassic Park. When a viewer watches the poster, what makes this viewer want to see the film? Review the model lens analysis essay.
The sci-fi adverstisement is telling viewers that there is a fight going on between Metal which are robots and monsters . To convey this message, the advertisement symbolizes machine and different speicies. The Message “Metal vs Monster” suggests that there is a war going on with with the Metals and Monsters.
The sci-fi advertisement is telling viewers that there is a fight going on between Metal which are robots and monsters (1) . To convey this message, the advertisement symbolizes machine and different species(2). The Message “Metal vs Monster” suggests that there is a war going on with with the Metals and Monsters.(3): by watching the movie young teens can enjoy the sci-fi movie , fight between Metal robots and monsters.
Develop these ideas further. What desires or fears might this advertisement be appealing to?
This advertisement is telling viewers that they can save these children by support the banning of assault weapons in the United States. To convey this message, the advertisement shows the viewers a possible future of more school shootings through the image of children in a classroom.
This advertisement uses the viewers desire to protect children by supporting the banning of assault weapons in the United States (1). To convey this message the advertisement compares the petty banning of the kinder egg for the safety of children (2) to the lack of a gun ban that has killed millions of children around the world (3). It is also using the feeling of horror to give innocent children the ability to own and use a long gun(4) that can turn into the fear of a future of more school shootings(5).
Good revisions! To develop your thesis further, consider if the advertisement is appealing to ethos, logos and/or pathos.
The explicit message of the advertisement is clear, so we know that it is trying to persuade the audiences to see this movie. There are three pyramids in the middle of the desert, and they easily catch people’s attention. Is this a movie about Pyramid? The elements in the poster give some information about the movie.
The explicit message of the advertisement is clear, so we know that it is trying to persuade the audiences to see this movie(1). There are three pyramids in the middle of the desert, and they easily catch people’s attention(2). Is this a movie about Pyramid? The elements in the poster give some information about the movie(3).
This is not yet a strong thesis. Notice that you are not making any claims, but rather are stating observations or facts about the poster. Consider the effects of the various elements of the poster like the title, the lighting, and the images.
I believe that This advertisement is telling viewers that acceptance of diversity is now encouraged and accepted.by putting an image of mystic in her monster form the ad makers are conveying the message to show your inner self and place it outward.
Sub points of the thesis:
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There is a problem in American culture today.i came across a movie poster called men apocalypse . I believe that this ad was chosen to first sell tickets. I also believe that it has a deeper message that by using fear it will attract the intended audience to buy the movie ticket. Using Solomon cohens thesis.i will prove that this poster is a reflection of culture. That in American culture this ad can be displayed without the viewer knowing the deep messages.
There is a problem in American culture today.i came across a movie poster called men apocalypse . (3)I believe that this ad was chosen to first sell tickets. I also believe that it has a deeper message that by using fear it will attract the(2) intended audience to buy the movie ticket. (1)Using Solomon cohens thesis.i will prove that this poster is a reflection of culture. That in American culture this ad can be displayed without the viewer knowing the deep messages.(4)
Your thesis is still too vague. What fear does the poster appeal to? What story does the poster suggest? What is the deeper message about American culture in the poster?
In class revision:
The advertisement xmen apocalypse placed in us theathers all across America appeals to the viewers fear. By placing a monstrous image of mystic the ad makers hope to attract movie goers to the poster . By placing mystic as the over all central figure the poster implies that she is a major attraction that she will perhaps be a hero now in her monstrous form as opposed to her human form.the darkness that covers most of the poster may show that she may be a major figure but for the evil side on the contrary the light behind her head may suggest that the good in her may conflict with her evil ways.and that is why u should watch the film to discover how mystic will decide which side to be on.
The advertisement for The Shape of Water caters to the viewer’s fantasy that anyone can find love, and to find the proof of this the claim and to reassure themselves of these fantasies they should buy tickets and watch the movie. To convey this message, the advertisement the advertisement depicts a “monstrous” relationship that breaks social norms, appealing to their fears of loneliness and never finding true love. The name of the movie and the affectionate posture of the woman and the creature in love provides a solution to this problem, by allowing the viewer to step into the monsters body and substituting the monster in their mind to something they desire, so they are reassured that they themselves can find love.
The advertisement for The Shape of Water tells the viewer that they can find true boundless love and at the same time gain social status to have a perfect relationship that is idolized and at an apex of the eyes of the viewer in their particular culture, and to reassure that these the fantasies of the viewer can become a reality they should buy tickets and watch the movie. To convey this message, the ad depicts a monster and in turn a monstrous relationship that breaks social norms. To provide a solution to their desires to find true love and rise above the crowd, by watching the movie and the viewer projecting their inner desires on to the monster and the monstrous relationship.
The advertisement for The Shape of Water tells the viewer that they can find true boundless love(2) and at the same time gain social status to have a perfect relationship(9) that is idolized and at an apex of the eyes of the viewer(9) in their particular culture(9), and to reassure that these the fantasies of the viewer can become a reality(8) they should buy tickets and watch the movie. To convey this message, the ad depicts a monster and in turn a monstrous relationship that breaks social norms(7). To provide a solution to their desires to find true love and rise above the crowd, by watching the movie and the viewer projecting their inner desires on to the monster and the monstrous relationship(9).
Simplify. Simplify. Keep in mind that the advertisement aims to get viewers interested enough to watch the movie. You do not yet explain what about the advertisement would intrigue a viewer and suggest a certain type of story.
REVISED VERSION:
The poster has no apparent explicit messages, other than the name of the director and the time of the release of the movie in theaters. The advertisement is telling it’s audience of primarily Western viewers, that they can take an escape their everyday mundane lives and begin to believe that they can themselves find love like no other by watching the movie The Shape of Water. They convey this message using a human woman underwater embracing a creature, appealing to their desire to escape and experience something new, and also their desire to find love. By watching the movie, the viewer can abolish their fears of loneliness and allow themselves to project themselves out of their own lives.
The movie poster created the advertisement in order to publicize the film named “The Mist”, which was shown on 2007. Therefore, the explicit message that the advertisement hopes to show us is that the audience can go to the cinema to see the horror film of The Mist. It is designed not only to attract audiences interested in horror films, but also to attract audiences who are full of confusion and fear in their life, and its purpose is to encourage them to overcome their fears.
The movie poster created the advertisement in order to publicize the film named “The Mist”, which was shown on 2007. (1) Therefore, the explicit message that the advertisement hopes to show us is that the audience can go to the cinema to see the horror film of The Mist. (2) It is designed not only to attract audiences interested in horror films, but also to attract audiences who are full of confusion and fear in their life, (3) and its purpose is to encourage them to overcome their fears.(4)
Develop your thesis further by explaining what about the poster would make a viewer want to watch the film.
The sky of this movie poster mixed with green and dark color which implies that air pollution is serious problem in Western nations, especially Italy. People frequently use transportation such as cars, trains, planes, and ships to make life easier, but the fact is the pollution that caused by them is unavoidable. This advertisement is telling viewers to protect the environment.
The sky of this movie poster mixed with green and dark color which implies that air pollution is serious problem（1） in Western nations, especially Italy（2）. People frequently use transportation such as cars, trains, planes, and ships to make life easier（3）, but the fact is the pollution that caused by them is unavoidable（4）. This advertisement is telling viewers to protect the environment.（5）
Develop your thesis further by explaining what about the poster would make a viewer want to watch the film.
The ads tells about tooth floss is much more efficient and effective comparing the toothpick.The purpose of the advertisement is to help gain awareness of dental health also convincing people to buy tooth floss. toothpicks do not remove all of the seaside. At this time, you need dental floss to throughly clean your gums and this is the purpose of this ads.
The ads tells about tooth floss is much more efficient and effective comparing the toothpick（1）.The purpose of the advertisement is to help gain awareness of dental health （2）also convincing people to buy tooth floss（3）. toothpicks do not remove all of the seaside，at this time, you need dental floss to throughly clean your gums （4）and this is the purpose of this ads.
Good work. Develop your thesis further by specifying what fears or desires the advertisement appeals to.
This poster is telling viewers that what they can see on the movie “reign of fire” and try to let people buy the movie ticket. To convey this message, the advertisement symbolizes a war between those spitfire dragons and the real world people, let people have more interesting about this movie. The intended audience is the people who have interesting about the war movie, monster movie or the young people.
This poster is telling viewers that what they can see on the movie “reign of fire” (1)and try to let people buy the movie ticket(2). To convey this message, the advertisement symbolizes a war between those spitfire dragons and the real world people(4), let people have more interesting about this movie(5). The intended audience is the people who have interesting about the war movie, monster movie or the young people(6).
Good start but you need to develop your ideas further. You are *describing* the poster but not yet explaining how it symbolizes fears, desires, or concerns in the target audience.