Post your revision of your thesis as a comment below. Follow the revision procedure we used in class today.
- check to make sure that your thesis is made up of claims and not facts
- break your thesis into sub-claims
- make these sub-claims specific by reviewing and analyzing evidence from the poster
A strong thesis should:
- explain the main message of the poster
- explain how the poster conveys this message (via fear/desire, ethos/logos/pathos)
- state the intended audience
Use simple sentence structure to make sure that your ideas are clear for your reader.
This movie poster is bringing audiences to this different avadar world and make them feel emotions about fear and love. In addition, this movie poster attracts people who like fantasy film. Moreover, the audiences can understand the importance of peace by analyzing the elements from poster. Furthermore, the poster is also trying to tell people that there is always a hope that we never should abandon. Finally, the monsters are not only a monster but also represent a specific culture.
This poster is telling us that an average American can be different from the rest of the people, be unique, (1) if he is willing to take some risks. (2) This way he will achieve a higher status between the rest of the people (3). As every young American desire. it’s also telling us that this way to be unique could be excited, full of adventures and dangers (4) but it’s worth it if at the end you achieve your goals (5) And looking at this we can say that the intended audience are American young males (6), because they have stronger ambitions and wishes to be different (7). Presenting a young American man in a heroic way is appealing to their desires (8). Also showing him with a pack of dinosaurs in the jungle in the middle of the night is appealing to their desires of adventures and changes (9), especially in young adults.
This poster is telling us that an average American can be different from the rest of the people, be unique, (1) if he is willing to take some risks. (2) This way he will achieve a higher status between the rest of the people (3). As every young American desire. it’s also telling us that this way to be unique could be excited, full of adventures and dangers (4) but it’s worth it if at the end you achieve your goals (5) And looking at this we can say that the intended audience are American young males (6), because they have stronger ambitions and wishes to be different (7). Presenting a young American man in a heroic way is appealing to their desires (8). Also showing him with a pack of dinosaurs in the jungle in the middle of the night is appealing to their desires of adventures and changes (9) and at the same time is also appealing to their fears to the unknown or to our own monsters (10).
The ads compared a broccoli who is arrogant and rich with a poor toothpick who are miserably picking up garbage inside the pool to show that there is somewhere inside our mouth where a toothpick can’t clean up, but there is a tooth floss’s logo on the top.The people who has dental problem will know, by using their tooth floss, it can guarantee to secure the health of our mouth.It tells about tooth floss is much more efficient and effective comparing the toothpick. Toothpicks do not remove all of the seaside. At this time, the ads uses the fear that people have with unhealthy oral, where people believe it can create unexpected sickness, and also generate the desire of wanting a health oral,to let people to buy the tooth floss.
Even though explicit message of this poster is unclear, we know that advertiser is trying to attract people’s attention to watch this movie by placing a sexy woman dressed strangely—only wearing underwear— at the center of the poster followed by a monster. If the advertiser places a sexy woman in the middle of the poster for attracting people to watch the movie, then what is the purpose of putting a monster follow by her? However, The sky of this movie poster mixed with green and dark color which implies that air pollution is serious problem in Western nations, especially Italy. The monster in the poster may be a reflection of the society in Italy,
which implies the intended audience is Italian.
“Hamster Boy” as a successful advertising print presents to its audiences an outstanding product which can arouse their desire for eating (1) and satisfy their curiosity toward the novel thing (2). The advertisers utilize the “hamster cheek” to attract attention at first(5) which can indirectly bring them into the print (6), and they also add circus elements (6) to create a “fantasy land” (7) for children.The logo of “Sweet From Heaven” provides an entrance of escaping reality, and inviting to children to experience a totally novel feeling which everyone should own. The advertisers combine the various elements together to emphasize that only “Sweet From Heaven” can bring to children (8) this feeling.
This poster is telling viewers that what they can see on the movie “reign of fire” and try to let people buy the movie ticket. To convey this message, the advertisement symbolizes a war between those spitfire dragons and the real-world people, it let target audience fears or concerns about the fire from dragons, is it will show up one day in future? Or maybe in the future, there will have some other monsters show up and we need a fight with them? Those will catch people’s attention if they are interested in it. The intended audience is the people who have interesting about the war movie, monster movie or the young people.
This poster is telling its audiences that the mummy is the main character in the movie. To convey this message, the company makes the mummy face as the biggest part in the poster. It uses different colors on the mummy face to express that the mummy is angry and dangerous. The resurrected mummy is threatening human.
This advertisement uses the viewers, that is parents (1), desire to protect children (2) to support the banning of assault weapons in the United States (3). To convey this message, the ad makes you question the logic of the government about their choice (4) to ban kinder eggs in the interest of child safety (5), but not ban assault weapons that may contradict that same interest (6). It is also using the feeling of horror and fear of the deaths of innocent children (7).