Describe your revision plan for your scholarly research essay. List at least the next three steps you need to take, explaining why you must take each step.
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– Revised my introduction and focus the first paragraph toward the main question. The reason I
need to do it is to prepare the readers from the beginning for the central question.
– Need to find theoretical sources, the reason I need it is to make a better argument.
– Provide more analysis, utilizing the sources, to make a strongest argument and support my
points.
Revised my introduction and focus the first paragraph toward the main question. The reason I need to do it is to prepare the readers from the beginning for the central question.
Need to find theoretical sources, the reason I need it is to make a better argument.
Provide more analysis, utilizing the sources, to make a strongest argument and support my points.
Step 1: Revise lens analysis. I need to be able to not explain so much the idea but instead analyze it and connect it to the problem I am arguing. Also to be able to incorporate my own ideas.
Step 2: Add the existing arguement. I have not added the other side of the debate in my essay but perhaps adding it will help clarify the distinction between the counterside and my side.
Step 3: Distinguish my sources. I need to be able to precise with my sources and know when to use which ones and make sure they make sense with the paragraph I am talking about.
1- find theoretical sources that are specific to the main topic of my research essay.
2.find context sources
3.Analyse analyze analyze
agree
1.go to office hour talk about main question and make it more clarity
2.find one more theoretical source
3. do more analysis instead of summarize other’s idea
1 the first thing that i need to do is to find the sources such as argument source etc.
2 and find one of the specific moment from film to connect to the source
3 must do the lens analysis and rhetorical analysis
1. Need more theoretical source.
2. Need more analysis than summary.
3. Need to develop/work on the question.
1. to find more theoretical sources and use lens analysis to gey my owe arguable viewpoints.
2. rearrange the contents to make the essay more smooth.
3. select sources that I need.
4. find someone to give feedback on my essay.
5. list PSA outline to understand what I need to write in different part of essay
1. find more source about the status of women in America and the West
2. find the more clear contact between Alice and female status
3. lens analysis of specific scenes
1. Find more argument, theoretical, contextual sources
2. Rewrite the essay entering centering around the relevant sources
3. Introduce a new unexplored argument and work on that
4. Work on improving the introduction according to the template
1.finding argument sources, and find out relevant theory.
2. connect sources to my question
3.review lens analysis, and do more analysis in essay.
1.need more analysis
2.need more summary
3.find sources in database
Step 1) Include more theoretical sources. This will allow me to do more lens analysis of more specific parts of the essay
Step 2) Lessen the amount of summary
Step 3) Have someone read my essay and then give me feedback
1. I also need explore the role of globalization in the film.
2. I also need use Lens analysis.
3. I also need research more effective source.
1. have a lens analysis of theoretical source
2. have analysis for existing argument
3. have my own argument than summarizing
Step 1: introduce my theoretical source,I think my theore isn’t clear enough that I need to do more analyze and research.
Step 2: make arguement more stronger, I need more precise to use quote and to prove my opion.
Step3:c Add more contextual source, I need do more research and analyze my exhibit.
Step 1: My essay does not include theoretical sources, so I need to do more research, and use the sources in my essay.
Step 2: My essay does not include rhetorical analysis, so I need to supplement it.
Step 3: I need to develop all my analysis.