Revised Final Draft of Essay 2
You have the opportunity to submit a revised final draft of Essay 2 by 11:59 p.m. Saturday, May 12th. In order to be eligible to submit this draft, you were supposed to have met with me during office hours or during an alternative time. However, if you did not meet with me, I will still allow you to submit a revision. In your revision:
- underline your thesis and the topic sentence of each paragraph
- include a PAS outline on a separate page at the end
- include a self-evaluation that explains how you used previous draft feedback to guide your revision choices. Name the handouts or model essays you reviewed during your revision process.
If these are not included, your revision will not be graded. Late submissions will not be graded. Submit your revision of Essay 2 to this Dropbox folder: https://www.dropbox.com/request/eYh6LQt9xAhA4BVSjDHG
Formal Draft B of Essay 3
You have the opportunity to submit a revised formal draft of Essay 3 by 11:59 p.m. Monday, May 14th. This is optional, not mandatory. In your formal draft:
- state your developing thesis after you ask your central question(s)
- underline your thesis and the topic sentence of each paragraph
- include a PAS outline on a separate page at the end
- include a self-evaluation that explains the path(s) of argument you attempted to use, what you think is working so far, and what challenges you are still facing. Name the handouts or model essays you reviewed during your revision process.
If these are not included, your draft will not receive feedback. Submit your formal draft B to this Dropbox folder: https://www.dropbox.com/request/f3iXfgwKLNmAo5To80Lg
